Blue Fairy

This is really good. You have explained both sides and have backed them up well with strong points. :D I can't think of anything that you can improve on. good ...

1) I love the winking kitty it's so cute and it's nose is adorable. It's fur looks so nice. 2) The eye: this picture looks a bit fuzzy and I ...

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hi Sketch What's your favourite colour? :D (random question) ~Fairy

ahhhh! one big towering block of text. try putting it into paragraphs you will get a lot more reviews :D

This is great! You are a really good writer :D You have described everything really clearly to build up a good picture in the reader's head. The layout and paragraph's ...

I think you could split this into a few paragraphs so it's easy for people to read. I love how you described the people coming to see her but like ...

(Hannah and Ivy) Ivy took Jax's hand and together they entered the small ice cream shop. It wasn't that small inside, it was more like a dessert restaurant. They sat ...

haha I'd give it a cake with sprinkles

So sorry about your great-grandma. It's a nice picture. I like the trails in the sky and the water looks really calm

The wings are great and i really like the dress. The flowers are really cool and jazzy and bright :D Her waist is quite thin but it's ok. The grass ...

I like the red light thing it looks nice.:) I think via is right though. Try and post the others you did at school :D

picture 1: I like the way the water is going in little waves Picture 2: The picture is a bit blurry but I like the hat Picture 3: I love ...

I agree with Aliza It does look very professional and pretty :D well done

haha I read it and now I understand :D good picture. I like the chat couch in the background.